User talk:Maxwell King123321/Archives/2020/March

Lil' Kim
Thank you for your contribution to Lil' Kim. I've been trying to re-write the text you added but I'm having difficulty. Because Wikipedia is written in a formal style, contractions like "wasn't" are not used. As well, cliches like "paving the way" and "the rap game" are avoided. Manual of Style/Words to watch has more detail, as do other parts of the Manual of Style. Would you mind taking a try at re-writing "Lil' Kim has been credited for paving the way for females to embrace their 'sexuality and femininity' in a way that wasn't widely appreciated in a time when the rap game was dominated with males"? Thank you. Magnolia677 (talk) 23:57, 5 November 2019 (UTC)

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Hello, Maxwell King123321, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Unfortunately, your edit to Pink Friday does not conform to Wikipedia's Neutral Point of View policy (NPOV). Wikipedia articles should refer only to facts and interpretations that have been stated in print or on reputable websites or other forms of media.

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Sulfurboy (talk) 08:32, 23 February 2020 (UTC)