User talk:Mbizi02/sandbox

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The main thing the draft needs is closer referencing from independent references. Tanatsei's website at https://www.tanagambura.com/bio/ would be best used as an external link at the bottom of the article. There is a problem with copying material directly from this or any other website: it should be paraphrased, not closely, and used in a concise way.

There is clearly enough to be said about Tanatsei. It seems her year of birth is 1999: http://www.checkcompany.co.uk/director/16290947/MS-TANATSEI-GAMBURA. https://www.catherinewheels.co.uk/about/who-we-are/our-board relates to her position on the board with that theatre company, which has a Wikipedia article at Catherine Wheels Theatre Company. https://www.scotsman.com/arts-and-culture/art/art-review-art-walk-porty-festival-various-venues-portobello-3828980 mentions one of her commissions. https://bulawayo24.com/index-id-entertainment-sc-arts-byo-121822.html mentions her. There are other stories in Google News that may be helpful. Charles Matthews (talk) 06:20, 26 April 2023 (UTC)