User talk:Mbjordahl/Mutual shaping

M - Great additions to your article page. I like that you added to the subject definition as well as two separate sections. I agree with Victoria that some of your sentences are long and can be broken up into two sentences. Nice work!DrTraceyHayes (talk) 06:55, 26 February 2020 (UTC)

Hi! I think your contributions are awesome - adding a new section is a smart way to contribute to the article. Some of your sentences are a bit long and should be broken up into two sentences, otherwise the sentence sounds a little like rambling when read aloud. Other than that, I think your research is well done!

Victoria 01:10, 24 February 2020 (UTC)