User talk:Mbluek/Parental leave

Possible edits
Good work drafting this section. I just have a few minor suggestions for edits. Shakaigaku Obasan (talk) 15:27, 17 November 2021 (UTC).
 * 1) Your entry relies on one source, so please consider expanding your sources.
 * 2) You used both "Black and Hispanic mothers" and "people of color" in the same paragraph. Because the latter term is more inclusive (see https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Person_of_color), I would try to stick to the terms being used by the source.
 * 3) Since the main page does not specifically discusses about the race relations and terms in the US, you may want to provide links to some key terms like this (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_people) and this (https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hispanic_and_Latino_Americans). I would not assume that all Wikipedia readers understand these US-specific social signifiers.