User talk:Mbmorley/sandbox

Hey! I just took a quick look and it looks like you've taken a comprehensive approach to reviewing this thing. I definitely suggest a rigorous review of all the citation and also just really populating the article with as many as you can. Also, it looks like the theory section could definitely use some work :)

Good luck!

This is really interesting. I am surprised you would want to do the entire article. I think you could go in depth with just one section, particularly expanding the brief mention of migration. Some of the migration/EU books referenced seems like they should be fleshed out more to drive the point home that securitization is a process unlike security studies. I liked your notes. They do a great job at pointing out the weaknesses in the article. I think the large quote under the effects on society needs to be tightened up because I had no idea how to place that quote in context. What states were they referring to? What is UNECE? Where are they getting their numbers from? I can imagine how hard it is to edit this page because it seems like the author of the original book wrote the wikipage. However, I think the affected sectors needs to also be fleshed out... either with clear frameworks or examples. Do you plan on reading the 1998 book? Have other people used this person's work? That may be one way to see how it has evolved since 1998. Public Health in the United States has surely been securitized since then.

JoonDay (talk) 02:13, 26 February 2017 (UTC)