User talk:Mbsummit/sandbox

Information in the edit leads back to citations crediting articles discussing Ryan's ToyReview. I only suggest adding articles that have more reliable editors. The language in this edit is made up of verifiable information. However, there is a tone of subjectivity with the words, “not only did large companies advise the name change,” which may suggest that it is surprising that companies did more than advise a name change. Also, a value statement I notice is when the writer describes Ryan as “the young boy.”