User talk:Mbufio

Bronwyn Bancroft
I'm glad you want to contribute to WP's articles. The content at Bronwyn Bancroft was the subject of review at WP:FAC, as well as discussion at the article talk page, and it is not clear from your edit summaries exactly why you have made this host of changes. Several of them appear to revert material that was explicitly discussed as needing to be included; others remove encyclopedic information (such as a person's children) depsite that informatino being cited to reliable sources; others resulted in making the article sytlistically poorer, such as failing to name the subject of the first sentence of a paragraph. They also almost completely destroyed the lead, making it MOS non-compliant. I have reverted your changes for now. If you want to raise what your concerns may be, please do it at the article talk page. Regards, hamiltonstone (talk) 10:46, 1 June 2014 (UTC)