User talk:McLynch

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Hello, McLynch, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Feedback on National Civil Police of El Salvador
Hi McLynch, I reviewed National Civil Police of El Salvador and noticed you substantially added content. Thanks for that. You can showcase the new and improved content by expanding the lead paragraph, or first paragraph. The lead should summarize the rest of the article, and right now, it falls well short of that. I hope you'll consider addressing this problem. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:15, 4 December 2018 (UTC)