User talk:McMcFadd

Need suggestions for improvement
Hi!

I notice that you accessed Spacetime using a mobile device. Did you use a tablet or a phone?

The mobile interface, in particular the phone interface, is very different from the desktop interface, and I have been very exasperated trying to make this article work on phones. Not having a table of contents on phones as a navigation aid is a real handicap when dealing with such a long article.

I was wondering if you had suggestions for improving the article? Not just the mobile interface, but overall. It has been a challenge trying to write a long article on a technical topic in a manner accessible to a wide audience. Thanks for your critique, Stigmatella aurantiaca (talk) 22:52, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
 * Was the tight integration of main topics with associated section summaries successful?
 * With the exception of "Beyond the basics" and "Technical topics", my aim was to make the sections accessible to readers in the middle school to high school range. "Beyond the basics" inevitably required some knowledge of trigonometry. With the exception of those two sections, was the approach taken in explaining the subject successful?