User talk:Mcanessa1/sandbox

So I'm not sure what your topic is. Also, the paragraph is filled with your opinions. For example, "I feel when looking at economic history it is important to include the United States and it's contributions to the worldwide economy." I would omit how you feel abot the economic history. Also, check your apostrophe usage. The main issue is that it's not at all clear what the topic is. There are also no citations. The draft needs significant attention.Cassell04 (talk) 14:45, 10 October 2018 (UTC)