User talk:Mcastanho707/Arturo Elizondo

Merging Bibliography/Citing Information
Hello! Should we maybe try to merge the bibliography and references page into this page? Also adding citations to the body of the work refering to the references? Enzokala (talk) 03:59, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Avoiding Vagueness
I think we should be more specific with the information that's being offered throughout the content of the article. I noticed a couple of instances that the content could be improved:

- In the lead paragraph we refer to his realization during his education: "a new path was to be followed to bring about change that he wanted to see in the world, which drove him to become the co-founder and CEO of The EVERY Company." We can be more specific by referring to his aims of creating and improving a more sustainable and safer food system through the efforts of his company.

- In the lead paragraph, we refer to how "Arturo has recently made the Forbes 30 under 30 list." We can be more specific by stating that he was listed on the Forbes 30 under 30 - Science list (SPECIFICALLY) in 2020, since this article will be lasting longer than 2023... Enzokala (talk) 04:37, 26 June 2023 (UTC)

Bio Picture
I am not sure if that picture we will be able to use. I used that OpenVerse website and it had two pictures where you could really see his face. Maybe we could use that? How can we verify that the one we chose for the bio picture is ok to use? Mcastanho707 (talk) 08:16, 1 July 2023 (UTC)