User talk:Mcdadee/sandbox

Peer Review
- How could your peer improve the lead? I think the lead is good as is. It is clear and detailed. - Is the overall article structure clear? The overall structure is good. The lead is solid and the follow on sections are well done. - Is there balanced coverage of the topic? Is the tone neutral? The tone is neutral and the coverage of the topic is balanced. - Are the sources reliable? The sources appear to be reliable. - What proofreading or writing suggestions do you have to improve the article? Overall your article looks good. See below for further input. - What other things would you add or fix in the article? Quotation marks should be placed after other punctuation marks i.e. "Blow ye trumpet, blow," (you have  "Blow ye trumpet, blow",). Also, citations should be placed outside the punctuation marks.