User talk:Mcdavid.j/sandbox

The tone throughout was very neutral. I would add more to the research section. I would also expand maybe even just one or two more sentences on the ect section. Other than that this is a really nicely written article. -Kathleen Duffey — Preceding unsigned comment added by Duffey.ka (talk • contribs) 11:05, 8 August 2017 (UTC)

Hey,

I would like to start by saying this article is very well done, and good job! There are very few adjustments I would make outside of aesthetic ones. Some of the paragraphs seem to be accidentally made bold, and some of the title headers are different from the others. I would recommend keeping things the same throughout the entire article. It would also be interesting to see where the treatment of mental disorders is heading in the future and I think it would make an interesting section in your article if you choose to add that. Mrw7816 (talk) 20:04, 11 August 2017 (UTC)