User talk:Mckalet/Respectability politics

Peer Review
The article’s overall status is semi- complete. The article covers very important intersectional information that is a great addition to the wiki page. The author gives good examples on how these respectability politics manifest and the effects that they can have on women. There are a few main concerns. The first are the references. The references need to be restructured. The full citations should be generated through wiki so that the links to the sources are embedded correctly. Second, there needs to be intext citations-- which are really easy to add through wiki, I believe there's a training that goes over how to do it. Right now, there aren't any in text citations so the reader doesn't know which statements come from which sources. The sources themselves are great. Another aspect that can be improved is the tone. I think the tone of this piece should be more neutral. A few sentences/the last paragraph start to become persuasive. Specifically, at the end with the sentence about what we as a society should do instead is trying to get the reader to believe one thing over the other and that's not supposed to be the purpose of a wiki article. I think the article is slightly underdeveloped. Fixing the tone and references would take the article to being almost fully developed. Ivy&#38;Fern2003 (talk) 02:38, 3 April 2023 (UTC) Ivy&#38;Fern2003 (talk) 01:33, 3 April 2023 (UTC)