User talk:Mckalet/Respectability politics/Rianna15 Peer Review

Overall I would say the article is headed in a good direction! The article does a nice job of introducing what respectability politics is in a clear and concise manner. The article is also well-written and presents a lot of important information on how respectability politics affects black women, a historically underrepresented group. One way that the article can be improved is by creating a more neutral tone. The article does a good job of staying neutral but the last paragraph becomes more persuasive and opinionated than factual and should focus more on how respectability politics creates pressure on black women and the unique ways it affects them instead of what society should look like. Another improvement that can be made is by making sure the facts and information are backed up throughout the article and cited. Adding more sources and implementing them throughout the article so that it is clear the facts being used are coming from a reliable source and not just opinions would also help add to the article. Also, the use of images to give readers a visual complement to the written words might also be helpful in enhancing the article. I would say the article is about halfway developed. It has great information that covers one of the equity gaps in Wikipedia, is also very easy to read and clearly outlined and by adding more citations/images as well as working to keep the tone neutral the article would become even more developed!Rianna15 (talk) 18:35, 3 April 2023 (UTC)