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Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you? In the Colin Kaepernick article every thing was relevant there was nothing that really distracted me because It tells you about who he is and not just what he did. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added? nothing is really out of date but it does talk about when he was in college but that really doing matter What else could be improved Is the article neutral? telling about what his response was in interview besides just saying he was protesting Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Not Really

Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?No — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mckellera (talk • contribs) 17:34, 26 September 2018 (UTC)