User talk:Mckenziedunleavy/sandbox

Elizabeth's Comments
Overall comment:
 * Is this all edited information from text that was previously there? Where are your sources and footnotes?

First paragraph:
 * "and is currently utilized by all" - "all" is too vague of a term.

Second Paragraph:
 * "as the use nearly every platform" They instead of the?
 * Last sentence is a run-on, condense or split in two

Daniel's Comments: Second Paragraph Who was the analysis of the different brands done by?

Overall, it might be good to add links to other Wikipedia pages, such as ethos, pathos, Coca-Cola, so one can learn more about maybe something that they are unaware of at the current reading moment. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Piatigda (talk • contribs) 16:36, 19 April 2018 (UTC)