User talk:Mckvnz

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Hello, Mckvnz, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Author's Note:
For the peer review, please look at these questions:

1) What have you done to revise/add on to your Wikipedia article? If there's anything you still have left to do, what is it?

2) What's going well? What are you most proud of so far?

3) What specific places in the article do you want feedback on from your peers?

Lauren's Peer Review
The introductory sentence that you created for the article is much more to the point than the current one. On that same note, the summary that you have describes the content of the article much better than the previous one. Adding all the different types of scholarships is a good addition to the article! The only suggestion I have is (if there are sources for this) to add small descriptions or links to the website for those specific scholarships. That way, the reader can get a feel for the large selection of scholarships. Overall, your addition will be perfect on the Point Foundation page! The new sources really demonstrate the hard work you put into this. Lauren.e.davis (talk) 02:15, 18 April 2018 (UTC)