User talk:Mclaughlinsarah98/sandbox

Peer Review by Teddy the Pooh
Hello there,

Great work on the Wikipedia contribution! You clearly introduced your topic on the first paragraph. It would help if you also indicate the racial demographics in Ecuador, unless of course the the article already has them. I would also briefly explain the linguistic history behind the derogative terms "cholo" and "longo," or just briefly explain what they mean within context. I don't know if we are supposed to do this, or whether it's even necessary (probably not), but I personally link certain words to their corresponding article on Wikipedia; that is, if they do have one. For example, you can write "Mestizos" as a hyperlink to its corresponding Wikipedia article.