User talk:Mcolfelt/sandbox

Hi Madeline! I wanted to check in before I left a peer review on your sandbox. I just wanted to check to see if you had your Wiki article up yet. I am not seeing a lot on my side. If you need anything let me know! Dlewis16 (talk) 05:13, 18 October 2018 (UTC) =Evaluations=

10/16/2018 Evaluation by Dlewis16

 * Points: 38/40
 * Grade: 95%

Spelling/Grammar
Meets Standard Museum of Folklore: You should take out the word "back" in the sentence "what life was like back in the." Changing the dates to 19th and 20th centuries allows more accuracy. I would take out the word "like" in the last sentence about the folklore museum and place "such as" instead, as well as change rulings to ruling (without the s). Museum of Archeology: Capitalize "also", and I would change "hundreds of decades" to "hundreds of years" for a cleaner sentence. Good article! I was just being nit-picky.

Language
Exceeds Standard Sounded formal and professional.

Organization
Meets Standard It is not the traditional, formal paragraph form. Though, when I looked at the city's page, I noticed it followed the same structure.

Coding
Meets Standard The only part I would change would be to link specific words to their designated Wikipedia articles.

Validity
Nearly Meets Standard I would add a few details in the first section and clarify and double check sources on the archeology section.

Completion
Nearly Meets Standard There were only two out of three sources used in your article.

Relevance
Exceeds Standard Museums are culturally very relevant to every city.

Mcolfelt Review - Evaluation by AFpsu1
I think that this is a good start to your article. There is some language that I think you could rephrase, and I also don't know if I would consider this first edit of your article entirely complete, as it is just a little bit short, but I think you have a good start.

Spelling/Grammar
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Language
Meets Expectations I think that you should replace the word "like" in the last sentence of your first bullet point. When you say "like the life and rulings...", I think that replacing "like" with a different phrase, for example, "such as" or "similar to" - just a few ideas. It is a small correction, just might sound a bit more formal.

Organization
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Coding
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Validity
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Completion
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Relevance
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