User talk:Mcompo/sandbox

Good work! - however, revise this sentence: From his influence a concept, the "Banksy effect" has developed.

he was always too slow and was either caught or could never finish the art in one sitting (this sentence sounds off) - grammar is overall good — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackteitelbaum (talk • contribs) 13:49, 28 November 2018 (UTC) - I like how you mentioned his early years as an artist, I think you should add a few sentences about Kato and Tes as they were the first artist to work with him. - Citations very strong. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jackteitelbaum (talk • contribs) 13:52, 28 November 2018 (UTC)

Stencils are traditionally hand drawn or printed onto sheets of acetate or card, before being cut out by hand. This technique allows artists to paint quickly to protect their anonymity. (there needs to be more context with this sentence because it is just thrown into the paper with no context)

For the second sentence, it was a bit choppy. Might look better looking something like this: He mentions in his book Wall and Piece that he started out doing graffiti, but he was always too slow and was either caught or could never finish the art in one sitting. Therefore, he devised a series of intricate stencils to minimize time and overlap the color.

Some critics claim Banksy was influenced by musicians and graffiti artists 3D.

Maybe make links to Kato and Tes.