User talk:Mdaze/sandbox

Evaluating an Article
Excellent work so far. I like all your suggestions, so pick one of the articles and start collecting sources. Post them on your dashboard. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:36, 4 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I see that you chose an article, evaluated its needs, and pasted it into your sandbox. So far so good. Now's the time to start drafting your changes. Making the industry section more globally-oriented is not a bad idea. Right now, it's not clear if the numbers listed are global or U.S. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:08, 22 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I see that you decided to add new sections to the article instead. Your edits look good. Is the information from the same one source? If so, cite it at the end of each section. Go ahead and move your work to the mainspace, including your citations and your internal links. Then leave a note in the article's talk page, and you'll be done. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:05, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

Final Assessment
Thank you for such a substantial and valuable contribution to the article on home security. Adding internal links to keywords like hammer and screwdriver may be overkill, but otherwise you improved the article in many ways - new information, sources, as well as overall organization. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:13, 6 May 2019 (UTC)