User talk:Mdbachmusic

September 2017
Welcome to Wikipedia. Although everyone is welcome to contribute constructively to the encyclopedia, your addition of one or more external links to the page Dalal Bruchmann has been reverted. Your edit here to Dalal Bruchmann was reverted by an automated bot that attempts to remove links which are discouraged per our external links guideline. The external link(s) you added or changed (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dalalmusic) is/are on my list of links to remove and probably shouldn't be included in Wikipedia. If the external link you inserted or changed was to a media file (e.g. a sound or video file) on an external server, then note that linking to such files may be subject to Wikipedia's copyright policy, as well as other parts of our external links guideline. If the information you linked to is indeed in violation of copyright, then such information should not be linked to. Please consider using our upload facility to upload a suitable media file, or consider linking to the original. If you were trying to insert an external link that does comply with our policies and guidelines, then please accept my creator's apologies and feel free to undo the bot's revert. However, if the link does not comply with our policies and guidelines, but your edit included other, constructive, changes to the article, feel free to make those changes again without re-adding the link. Please read Wikipedia's external links guideline for more information, and consult my list of frequently-reverted sites. For more information about me, see my FAQ page. Thanks! --XLinkBot (talk) 23:57, 15 September 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nate Jolley (October 24)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Sulfurboy was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

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Sulfurboy (talk) 17:33, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

November 2017
Hello, I'm Zackmann08. Thank you for your recent contributions to Dalal Bruchmann. I noticed that when you added the image to the infobox, you added it as a thumbnail. In the future, please do not use thumbnails when adding images to an infobox (see WP:INFOBOXIMAGE). What does this mean? Well in the infobox, when you specify the image you wish to use, instead of doing it like this:

SomeImage.jpg

Instead just supply the name of the image. So in this case you can simply do:

SomeImage.jpg.

There will then be a separate parameter for the image caption such as Some image caption. Please note that this is a generic form message I am leaving on your page because you recently added a thumbnail to an infobox. The specific parameters for the image and caption may be different for the infobox you are using! Please consult the Template page for the infobox being used to see better documentation. Thanks! Zackmann08 (Talk to me/What I been doing) 03:12, 14 November 2017 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nate Jolley (January 19)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by The Drover's Wife was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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The Drover&#39;s Wife (talk) 08:52, 19 January 2018 (UTC)


 * It isn't enough to have a handful of footnotes in the article: there are entire large sections of the article without references. A second issue that hasn't been brought up yet is that a lot of the text is promotional: text like "Jolley believes that everyone should have the opportunity to enhance and share their gifts with the world. The scholarship fund gives others a chance to live their dream of pursuing their talents and education at a great institution" is not suitable for an encyclopedia article, and there is quite a bit of similar language. The Drover&#39;s Wife (talk) 04:39, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Nate Jolley (February 28)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Heliosxeros was:

The comment the reviewer left was:

Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit when they have been resolved.


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EROS message 06:42, 28 February 2018 (UTC)

Draft:Nate Jolley


Hello, Mdbachmusic. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or draft page you started, Draft:Nate Jolley.

In accordance with our policy that Wikipedia is not for the indefinite hosting of material deemed unsuitable for the encyclopedia mainspace, the draft has been deleted. If you wish to retrieve it, you can request its undeletion by following the instructions at this link. An administrator will, in most cases, restore the submission so you can continue to work on it. —&thinsp;JJMC89&thinsp; (T·C) 05:03, 21 January 2019 (UTC)