User talk:Mdeek/draftarticle

Hi Mdeek, you have made some comprehensive expansion to this article and supplied at least one more source not closely aligned with Pilates. Some of the internal linking is weak in terms of relevance to the article. In text linking to other Wikipedia links is important to the experience Wikipedia offers users but need to relevant to the main topic in some way rather than distant background. You could take some links out. The diagrams are interesting. But I couldnt' find references for them, that may have been because they dropped out along the way. I suggest you need to put them in. I hope you publish this as it is addressing the problem ares identified in the page itself. JaneHaggis 03:13, 21 October 2019 (UTC)