User talk:Mdiez4/sandbox

Evaluate a source
Your sandbox is empty. Please complete this activity as soon as possible. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:08, 2 April 2019 (UTC)
 * I see that you added "Fashion merchandising" to the dashboard. That could be a good article to work on. Please suggest the changes you'd like to make. To begin with, the article's lead needs to be revised to start with a definition of its subject. See this guide, especially the section on "first sentence": . Josef Horáček (talk) 20:41, 4 April 2019 (UTC)

Can you please look at the new post I just added in my sandbox? Thank you! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mdiez4 (talk • contribs) 23:28, 10 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Your suggested contribution looks good. My only question is whether this information is specific to the U.S. or whether it applies internationally. If it's specific to the U.S., you should make that clear, either in the header (if there is one), or in the intro to your paragraph. Aside from that, you should be ready to move the text to the mainspace. Josef Horáček (talk) 14:53, 22 April 2019 (UTC)
 * Are you revising the introduction to the WP article? I do think that that would be the most useful contribution. You need to do more with it. There's no need to define merchandizing in general - just add an internal link to the relevant WP article. Instead, start the intro with a definition of fashion merchandizing. Draft the changes as soon as possible. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:16, 24 April 2019 (UTC)

Final Assessment
The introduction to "Fashion Merchandising" is much improved thanks to your contribution. It finally looks like a proper Wikipedia article. The only problem is that you didn't properly insert the citations. They should be displaying in the references at the bottom rather than inside the introduction. Josef Horáček (talk) 16:18, 6 May 2019 (UTC)