User talk:Mdimola/Pediatric Apheresis/KennyOkg Peer Review

Mdimola, I have done a peer review for your article on Pediatric Apheresis KennyOkg (talk) 03:09, 21 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you Saidat for your comprehensive and helpful peer review. I have added to my based on your suggestion to add an introduction to apheresis that lay-readers would find useful. I have also clarified the intent of the article in the lead body. Additionally, I have added more links and references to the blood products you mentioned.Mdimola (talk) 16:55, 24 November 2021 (UTC)