User talk:Mdonal12/sandbox

The page for the Stonewall Riots is such a great article. So much history that is clearly laid out and flows so well. Also, great that it included some of the leading rioters, like Marsha P. Johnson, Sylvia Rivera, Stormé DeLarverie. However, every account I have seen mentions that Marsha and Sylvia weren't just "street queens" but self-identified as transgender as well, but this article seems to leave that out. Maybe more research needs to be done on their self-identification. Mdonal12 (talk) 21:05, 7 September 2018 (UTC)

The draft is s nice start. You haven't included any citations except for local historical sources. Are there any scholarly articles on the topic? What were the economic reasons Zoar was funded? What was the political background of the founders? For instance, did they have a position on slavery or other policies of the day? Cassell04 (talk) 16:49, 13 October 2018 (UTC)