User talk:Meadowsadeh382004/Manus x Machina: Fashion in an Age of Technology

Peer review
Added my thoughts on your sandbox draft Tyswitzer (talk) 17:55, 27 March 2023 (UTC)


 * After reading through the draft, article, bib, and peer reviews, I think that you are on the right track; but, I agree with Ty that I found it a bit hard to follow your draft in terms of what contributions you've made versus what was already there. If I am reading it correctly, it looks like you still have a fair amount of work to do to get the draft where you want it. I'm glad to see you have a plan (if that's the case). Onwards--we should be moving our writing to the live article space by the end of this week. KGS8TH (talk) 14:10, 28 March 2023 (UTC)