User talk:Mecstud/Emerald Fennell/OOCHIAI Peer Review

Mecstud does a good job of making the readers understand the film style of Emerald Fennell tied to feminism. Through the film Promising Young Woman, Mecstud pushes the readers to understand the film while highlighting how woman are represented and used in films. I think the only thing I would recommend is tying more of her films to create a bigger picture to what she believed as a woman filmmaker. I also think you can tie in her career a bit more to better understand what she stood for in her personal life and that connection to her films. Other than that I think you have a strong starting point. I also found the article to be helpful to focus on a singular film to create a big message to the reader. The sourcing looks good, very concise and to the point, and very informative in a brief paragraph. I enjoyed reading it!