User talk:Meg bak1922/sandbox

Emily's feedback to Megan

Overall, the article is well written and informative. As you stated in class, the first sentence was previously written but you did a good job expanding on what workplace violence is and made it clear for people who have little to no knowledge about it which created a clear summary for the reader. This article if very clear to a non-expert because of how you broke down different examples and lists for the reader. This allows the reader to process the information and understand better. Even though this topic may be difficult to not show bias, you presented the information in a very clear and non-bias way for the reader to make their own decision. I did notice some grammar issues throughout the article, such as in the second sentence, "health" is misspelled. Make sure you read through a couple times before submitting to check for grammar. The formatting is good as you break down the different categories and list different examples and lists. It matches the rest of Wikipedia well as it has a nice flow and easy to read. You do not want to have too many bullet point lists but I think you have a good amount and they are appropriate for your topic. I would not add any more though. If possible, try to move your image up more in the article because I did not see it at the very bottom at first and it is an important part of the article. Your sources are very clear and nicely listed. Maybe try to add some hyper-links to your article to bring the reader to another article to help expand on the topic. Overall, this is a really good article and I found it very interesting

Stephee2 (talk) 17:02, 11 March 2019 (UTC)