User talk:MeganBodine/sandbox

Hi Megan, I enjoyed the information that was given in this article. I wrote down some observations I had while reading it. I separated them per section. The biggest thing I found was there was no in text citations and you had some scientific information in their that needs to be clearly cited. Other than, that I felt it was a neutral article and no bias either way and flowed well, I did not know they die after copulation, one thing I would add is their life span, that always a fact that I personally look for. I was not clear if you meant micro units in the Reproduction section, could you clarify what MU is please. Good article!

Physical Characteristics No in-Text Citation There is visible ring patternsThere are visible ring patterns

Flashing Behavior: No in-Text Citation in a wide range of chemicals that were know to affect chromatophores-> “known”
 * 1) definitely need a citation for last sentence

Distribution and habitat: No in-Text Citation
 * 1) Having a picture of the entrance would be good to see

Diet: No in-Text Citation Its known hunting behavior consists of pounces -> “pouncing” on its prey

Sex Identification and Mating Behavior: No in-Text Citation

Reproduction: No in-Text Citation Potential Danger: No in Text Citations 10,000 MU?? Is this micro units? Micro µ
 * 1) Starts off with a weird link

Genetics: No in-Text Citation

SAP 19:29, 5 March 2020 (UTC)