User talk:Megangr/sandbox

Peer Review: Hello, I like the approach you have with your article. You provide accurate sources to support your article. I know the article is still a work in progress, but might I suggest to add a little more structure. You jump from one fact to another without a brief summary or story on the information given. Although, I see that you are working on structure. In addition, adding links to certain words can help readers get a better sense of the word without you defining it because there is a link giving them access to a seperate article descibing the work or phrase. All in all, I believe you are on the right track with your article, keep up the good work! --Janajunelle (talk) 02:27, 3 November 2018 (UTC)