User talk:Meganshw/Live2D

Preliminary Review from Kaylea
Hi, I'm starting to walk through articles and give everyone informal early feedback on how they're doing. You'll notice this is a little bit form-letter-ish but I hope it is still helpful.

I see you've made some changes and are starting to incorporate elements from our training, but there's still a ways to go with this article. If you're feeling stuck, please let me know how I can support you.

Unfortunately, it looks like you made your copy-paste without first switching into wikicode editing mode, and that ended up damaging the formatting of the article as well as losing the references. There's a walkthrough video on the course syllabus page that explains how to do this. You will need to follow the instructions so that the formatting is copied correctly. You can see the changes you made using history and re-create them after you get a good copy-paste in place.

You'll want to take care of this before you do anything else. Let me know if you need a hand with this, or if you think I'm misunderstanding the situation.

In addition, you may notice that a logo or other image was removed from your article -- this is due to a copyright violation. If you look in your history you'll see that another Wikipedian caught the problem and fixed it for you. Some images are only allowed to exist once on Wikipedia -- in the main article for the topic -- and can't be in your sandbox. Don't worry, we'll add it back when we help you make your changes live.

Keep finding new sources and facts to extend the article -- you might find the sources vetted by WikiProject Video Games to be useful: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Video_games/Sources

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:23, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review from Mo
Hi! I have left some peer-review comments on the sub-page, hope they will be helpful to you! I am also a starter in Live2D so I believe there are a lot of interesting potential contents you can work on, I left some personal advice as well. Good Job so far and keep going! --MOIN2022 (talk) 06:02, 29 January 2022 (UTC)

Go Live Approval
Hi

You are approved to go live with this article. But, one thing that's worth fixing before you do is the first paragraph of the History section -- it seems to be more about the functioning of the system than the history per se. Also, I notice that there have been quite a few changes since you made your copy. That's ok, but it does mean going through each one to make sure the new information is incorporated (providing it's good information, that is).

As a reminder, here are our go-live steps:


 * 1) Final read-through draft.
 * 2) Check live article for changes. [History Tab]
 * 3) Two browsers side by side, if you can. Source editing mode ("Code mode"), not visual editor.
 * 4) Paragraph by paragraph copy, leaving behind an explanatory edit summary after each chunk of changes.
 * 5) Note on article talk page.
 * 6) Note at the top of your sandbox version.
 * 7) Submit a link to your article on Canvas.
 * 8) Celebrate!

Kaylea Champion (talk) 06:52, 11 February 2022 (UTC)