User talk:Megmcquillen/Social impact of the COVID-19 pandemic in the United States

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--Liliput000 (talk) 19:50, 26 April 2022 (UTC)
 * Overall, very very important addition because this needs more attention on this page, even though there is a whole other page. I think your approach is solid.
 * your first sentence is a bit odd in that it suggests xenophobia as linked to wanting to prevent/constrain COVID?
 * your second paragraph makes me think that you need a subheading on "impacts of..."
 * in this paragraph you have a long quote and I think it would be effective to give us a verbal/rhetorical cue as to who says this
 * next paragraph add the year to the date of March 20
 * Last paragraph is maybe "historical context" and you would do well to hyperlink out to other pages such as Orientalism here...