User talk:Mehvishtahseen/sandbox

Mehvish's peer review
I peer reviewed mehvish's article. It is well described and has a lot of details. It has a well-described starting paragraph which gives the idea of the rest of the article. It has a historic review of technology and society's relationship and the present situation and modern examples of Technology and society. If I talk about the resources, I think that they were quiet enough but if it has a little more resources that will be better. One thing which I don't like about is the ending. I think the ending needs improvement and more information could be added at the end of the article.