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Draft:Advanced Nursing Process


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Hello Hi I have newly written the text on the Advanced Nursing Process. This is not the same as Advanced Nursing (which describes Master prepared nurses holding an advanced nursing degree). The Advanced Nursing Process is a new concept that is not yet described in Wikipedia; and Im a specialist in this topic, and have added lots of research sources.

I would be glad for help in writing this new contribution so it suits Wikipedia, and mainly with the formatting of this article.

Kind regards Mehwei

The Advanced Nursing Process
The Advanced Nursing Process is the new version of the generally known Nursing Process, which provides a structure for nursing practice and is well established worldwide [1-4]. The Nursing Process leads the nurse to assess patients’ care needs and to plan and evaluate nursing care. It contains five phases: Nursing Assessment, Nursing Diagnoses, Outcomes / Planning, Implementation, and Evaluation [2, 5]. However, this structure was described as being empty of knowledge, as it was not described by literature-based, standardized concepts [6, 7]. Therefore, the question was: What does the Nursing Process consist of? What content knowledge should it contain to be taught and researched?

To fill this gap, the Advanced Nursing Process was defined and developed. The term Advanced Nursing Process was first mentioned by Ackley & Ladwig [1], whereas “advanced” means “further developed, deepened, based on scientifically defined concepts”. Later, Müller-Staub et al., (2015) developed this concept and published a literature-based definition: “The Advanced Nursing Process consists of defined, validated concepts. It includes assessment, nursing diagnoses, nursing interventions, and nursing outcomes that are rooted in scientifically based nursing classifications” [8], page 13. This expert-consented paper was also published in French and German [9, 10].

Today, the Advanced Nursing Process is taught and implemented by using standardized nursing classifications [6-28]. To teach nurses’ in the Advanced Nursing Process, the method ‘Guided Clinical Reasoning’ – a validated case study teaching method – has proven to be supportive [12, 29-35].

Research indicates [21, 36, 37] that three nursing classifications best represent the body of knowledge in nursing: the Nursing Diagnosis Classification NANDA-I [38], the Nursing Interventions Classification NIC [39, 40], and the Nursing Outcomes Classification NOC [18]. Together, they are called NNN-Classification [41]. The NNN are the best researched and validated, as well as the most internationally used nursing classifications [17, 26, 36, 37, 42]. The NNN provide the content for the Advanced Nursing Process and contain 244 defined nursing diagnoses [38], 540 NOC nursing outcomes [18], and 565 NIC nursing interventions [40].

The aim of the Advanced Nursing Process is the application of scientific knowledge to clinical patient situations by defined and validated concepts of nursing diagnoses, interventions and nursing-sensitive patient outcomes [43-54]. This aim is reached by applying the NNN in the Advanced Nursing Process in practice and by implementing it into Electronic Health Records (EHRs) [8, 12, 16, 19, 21, 24, 33, 36, 55-60].

An internationally consented standard gives direction on how to develop a Nursing Process - Clinical Decision Support System (NP-CDSS) in EHRs to help nurses in applying NNN in the Advanced Nursing Process. With the aid of an NP-CDSS, clinical nurses are fully supported to apply evidenced knowledge in care planning and evaluations [61]. Studies have shown that using the Advanced Nursing Process significantly enhances patient outcomes [12, 30, 31, 33, 42, 57, 62-64]. The NNN classifications of nursing diagnoses, interventions and outcomes contribute to the establishment of nursing as an independent profession with its own professional body of knowledge. Applying the NNN classifications in the Advanced Nursing Process points out what nurses do, why they do it, which objectives nurses’ pursue and which nursing-sensitive patient outcomes patients achieve. Additionally, the NNN makes clear what the difference is between nursing and other health professions [3, 4, 8, 17].

Mehwei (talk) 14:50, 3 August 2020 (UTC) --Mehwei (talk) 14:50, 3 August 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Advanced Nursing Process (October 21)
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ReaderofthePack (formerly Tokyogirl79)  (｡◕‿◕｡)  07:06, 21 October 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation
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Mehwei (talk) 20:45, 24 October 2020 (UTC)

I'm grateful for help to revise the text on the Advanced Nursing Process for fitting to Wikipedia. Im experienced in scientific writing, but not in encyclopaedia style. If you can assist in rewriting, I appreciate the draft, thanks. Mehwei (talk) 17:04, 5 November 2020 (UTC) Mehwei (talk) 17:04, 5 November 2020 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Advanced Nursing Process (April 11)
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Tom (LT) (talk) 01:26, 11 April 2021 (UTC)

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Thank you for your submission to Wikipedia. FireflyBot (talk) 16:02, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Your draft article, Draft:Advanced Nursing Process


Hello, Mehwei. It has been over six months since you last edited the Articles for Creation submission or Draft page you started, "Advanced Nursing Process".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. Liz Read! Talk! 15:07, 17 November 2021 (UTC)