User talk:Mekaisheffie10

Welcome!
Hello, Mekaisheffie10, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

I hope you enjoy editing here. If you haven't already done so, please check out the student training library, which introduces you to editing and Wikipedia's core principles. You may also want to check out the Teahouse, a community of Wikipedia editors dedicated to helping new users. Below are some resources to help you get started editing. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 02:28, 27 September 2018 (UTC)

Peer Review
Thus far, the article has a good lead. I was impressed by the quality sources. Some suggestions would be to be more inclusive by utilizing the term "LGBTQIA". Perhaps, rephrase the statement, "There are traditions and expectations that LGBT people should not study or have careers in science." Add some examples of traditions and expectations that are referred to in the statement and/or weave the source directly into the sentence to avoid the it reading like a judgement statement. Give some examples of who "some activists", "some academic commentators", and "Various activist organizations" are. Finally, is there any statistical evidence that could support the points of the article more specifically?JamieLynexander (talk) 19:42, 6 November 2018 (UTC)