User talk:Mel.mcguire/American rubyspot

Outline Feedback
This is a good start! A more detailed outline would allow me to provide more thorough feedback. For instance, I would describe how wing color correlates with body size and immune response and describe the different alternative mating tactics they use. The organization of the main ideas seems to flow okay, but I would make it three subsections: "Wing Coloration", "Alternative Mating Tactics", and "Population Divergence and Speciation".

I am happy to give more feedback and adjust the grade if you wish to update the outline! Elioeilish (talk) 20:55, 28 February 2023 (UTC)