User talk:Melanie3564/sandbox

Assignment 2
I would add sources to this article, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kerri_Walsh_Jennings My four additional sources would be: Ziccardi, N. (2014, September 8). Kerri Walsh Jennings, April Ross would not go back to old partners. NBC Olympic Talk. Retrieved February 10, 2015, from http://olympictalk.nbcsports.com/2014/09/08/kerri-walsh-jennings-april-ross-beach-volleyball-misty-may-treanor-olympics/

Shaw, G. (2012, October 15). Volleyball Champ Kerri Walsh Talks Baby No. 3. Retrieved February 10, 2015, from http://www.webmd.com/women/features/kerri-walsh-jennings-baby

Shinn, P. (2014, September 23). Kerri Walsh Jennings and April Ross Reflect on first Season Together. Retrieved February 10, 2015, from http://www.teamusa.org/News/2014/September/23/Kerri-Walsh-Jennings-And-April-Ross-Reflect-On-First-Season-Together

Bailey, S. (2013, June 24). Kerri Walsh Jennings, Mother of Three, to go for gold medal No. 4. Retrieved February 10, 2015, from http://www.latimes.com/sports/la-sp-beach-volleyball-walsh-20130625-story.html Melanie3564 (talk) 02:41, 11 February 2015 (UTC)Melanie
 * Good sources. Josef Horáček (talk) 00:52, 17 February 2015 (UTC)
 * The sources now seem to be added correctly to the article. The only thing I'd change is remove the links to articles accessed via databases. Most users wouldn't be able to use those links. Josef Horáček (talk) 06:00, 2 March 2015 (UTC)

Assignment 3
The article definitely needs help. You should start your lead differently. Something like, "The Tropics are a 1960s [fill in genre] band from ..." Then say who started the band and who was in it (what instruments did they play?). Proofread, especially the last sentence. At the end, add something about how and when they split up. Josef Horáček (talk) 06:07, 2 March 2015 (UTC)