User talk:MelissaCortellini

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School of the Holy Child
Thanks for your work on this article, but we can't have it be an advertisement. Material needs to be sourced, stuff like "Holy Child graduates are prepared for the innovative and critical thought necessary in a diverse, interconnected society" is marketing material, not proper for an encyclopedia. Same goes for "Challenged and engaged within the all-girls environment, students feel supported and empowered as they work collaboratively with both teachers and peers" and similar material. Give it a try and I'll follow thru and delete anything else that doesn't fit. Cheers.--Milowent • hasspoken 13:26, 9 October 2012 (UTC)