User talk:Melissacornwell/sandbox

You don't have a lot of content yet but the form of your outline seems like it could be off to a good start. The only thing I would change is that before you talk about the founders, you should probably introduce the organization and briefly state it's history. Tr5689872 (talk) 17:44, 25 April 2018 (UTC)

Amena1015 (talk) 22:15, 29 April 2018 (UTC)peerreviewangieAmena1015 (talk) 22:15, 29 April 2018 (UTC)
I would try to incorporate any events that happened prior to the organization being created. I would also suggest looking into Dorothy Robert's text because she discusses reproductive health and it is part of a wellness piece in a woman's life. Also, why is it important to talk about Crenshaw in regards to this, maybe a bit more explanation.

Peer Review

Melissa, I agree with Angie, I think your headings for the other paragraphs make sense and cover topics for an activist organization. In your lead paragraph, you do a good job of describing what BWWLA is and what they do. As you write out the article you may want to think about connecting it to readings we have done in class or other organizations like the BWWLA to make a bigger statement about how this organization contributes to principles of Black feminism thought. Also, you may want to add dates, just to give some context, and you can also compare the organization from the original group to the current day group.

Kajolrachelle (talk) 04:54, 1 May 2018 (UTC) Rachelle Shankar