User talk:MellowYellow72

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March 2020
Hello, I'm Hulmem. I noticed that you added or changed content in an article, Paul Revere & the Raiders, but you didn't provide a reliable source. It's been removed and archived in the page history for now, but if you'd like to include a citation and re-add it, please do so. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources, or if you think I made a mistake, you can leave me a message on my talk page. Thank you. hulmem (talk) 04:42, 16 March 2020 (UTC)

The McCoys
Hello. I appreciate the material on the McCoys you added in the Midwest section. The article clearly needs a mention of them—"Hang on Sloopy" was such a big hit—I'm glad you brought this into the article. I would like to take the McCoys' body of text out of the Midwest section and move it up to the Height of Popularity section where it needs to be. The McCoys and "Hang on Sloopy" should be in that section where the big hits are. The article's Regions sections (i.e. Midwest, etc.) are more there to go into detail about the various regional scenes and cover the well-regarded groups who may not have had top 40 hits, but are nonetheless considered important in garage rock. We also need to make the text about the McCoys more brief. The material about the group's later chart disappointments is unnecessary in a general article like this and detracts from their primary impact, which was "Hang on Sloopy". So, i'd like to tighten up the discussion and focus on their major point of success. Thanks, Garagepunk66 (talk) 19:41, 31 July 2020 (UTC)