User talk:Melly12many/sandbox

Becca's comments
You need her name to be the ultimate heading you also need a blurb to start (see other bios). add an info box (this is where her website can go)

early life & education: i would condense the 2nd and 3rd sentence or 3rd and 4th sentences. You can say 'she' instead of her name (it sounds super repetitive to always use her name) suggested edit: Benitez-Nelson earned her Ph.D. in Oceanography from Massachusetts Institute of Technology as part of the joint program with Woods Hole Oceanographic Institution in 1999. add the advisor and mentor information in with the degrees - it feels odd for them to come after

career & research: i would start this section with Benitez-Nelson is a Distinguished Professor in Marine Science and Department of Earth & Ocean Sciences at the University of South Carolina. Currently she also serves as the Associate Dean for Instruction, Community Engagement, and Research at the University of South Carolina.[12]. Then discuss her research...

suggested edit: Benitez-Nelson's research focuses on how human and natural processes effect the biogeochemical cycle and export fluxes of phosphorus, carbon and other nutrients to the ocean. Benitez-Nelson studies the past and current climate change using cosmogenic and uranium series radioisotopes to date ... (what does she do with these?) you need a couple more sentences on her research

Awards and Honors: cut "Benitez-Nelson has received many awards and honors for her research and position of professor and mentor to students. A major award" add "from the American Geophysical Union after 2014 for her Sulzman award i suggest making this section bullet points, then you can remove the connection bits

Publications: each should be cited to the publication

personal life: remove "also claimed to be" say "is"

Your citations need to be cleaned up - there is a lot of repetition