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Nice work!

While I agree that the plot summary could use a little work, perhaps particularly acts 3 & 4, I think expanding into stage directions and dialogue might be a bridge too far. It needs to remain a summary after all.

An expansion of the section of reaction above and beyond Yeats’ comments is an excellent idea. Who were the protestors/rioters? Why were they protesting? What happened in the theatre? What was the aftermath?

In terms of the political context of the play, I think it is certainly important to include it, but if I understand Wikipedia rules on relevancy correctly, you need to be careful not to repeat information that is to be found elsewhere on the site. I.e. – you can say that the play is about The Easter Rising, but a link to the rising should give the bulk of the political information.

Nice observations on the introductory paragraph, which should function more as an overview than at present, and nice work on Tone, Sources, and analysis of the Talk page.

EmerOToole (talk) 17:15, 3 October 2018 (UTC)