User talk:Memphis2027/Deaf President Now

Improvements
We added edits to:

- The second paragraph in the background section. We added a couple sentences and a few minor edits like adding or taking away words to improve the understanding of the information.

- The bulleted list under the protest section to make sure it was grammatically correct, or at least all the same.

- In the 8th paragraph under the protest section, we edited sentence structure, so it was less repetitive.

- We are going to add a section about media framing and how different articles covered the movement. Wildpanda1 (talk) 14:50, 26 April 2024 (UTC)

Edits Made
- In the protest section in the last paragraph I added more information about the interpreters who were involved in the DPN movement. I added it at the end of the paragraph

- In the aftermath section at the end I added more about what happened after DPN what it eventually led to and how it affected things afterward. With this, I added in how and what changed within the deaf community and for other people as well.

- In the second paragraph in the background section I fixed some of the grammar so there is more clarity and so the paragraph can flow more smoothly, there were 4 edits within the paragraph

- In the first paragraph in the protest section I fixed the grammar so there is more clarity and so it can be more smooth, there are 3 grammar edits within this paragraph. Memphis2027 (talk) 21:53, 26 April 2024 (UTC)