User talk:Memphremagog

Your submission at Articles for creation: Group14 Technologies (June 4)
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— TechnoSquirrel69 ( sigh ) 22:04, 4 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your guidance. I've updated the page with all third-party References, and smoothed out a few more things.   My only known "hole" is I need to file a conflict of interest reference somewhere (I serve on Group14's Board), but have not yet figured out how to do that.
 * Happy to receive more guidance..... Memphremagog (talk) 16:57, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Group14 Technologies (June 4)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Drmies was:

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Drmies (talk) 23:40, 4 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Please see my new draft. I hope it addresses your concerns.  If not, let me know what else I need to do.  Please note I've modeled the page after Sila Nanotech's Wikipedia page (the other major player in the space) so I hope that makes it more acceptable. Thanks.  Memphremagog (talk) 16:51, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Managing a conflict of interest
Hello, Memphremagog. We welcome your contributions, but if you have an external relationship with the people, places or things you have written about on the page Draft:Group14 Technologies, you may have a conflict of interest (COI). Editors with a conflict of interest may be unduly influenced by their connection to the topic. See the conflict of interest guideline and FAQ for article subjects for more information. We ask that you:


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Also, editing for the purpose of advertising, publicising, or promoting anyone or anything is not permitted. Thank you. Air on White (talk) 00:27, 5 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Thanks. I'm happy to disclose my conflict (I serve on the board of Group14 Technologies) and sadly could not quite figure that out in producing the latest draft.  Will try again if you can guide me.  I'm also happy to adjust my submission based on the feedback I've received from other reviewers (now on draft #3).  But I also want to push back a little on the policy that because of my "conflict" I shouldn't contribute.  The reason I drafted the page was because I noticed the other major supplier of silicon anode material, Sila Nanotech, had a Wikipedia page and Group14 did not.  I have modeled my submission after theirs (with different facts) and have learned the need for external references (in new drafts).  But if I can't offer this information to Wikipedia users, and day to day employees can't either, then Wikipedia ends up with a "hole" in its coverage of this exciting, emerging technology space.  Since I am both knowledgeable and motivated to contribute, I hope that as long as I clearly work to keep my bias off the page, the contribution will be welcomed.  Memphremagog (talk) 16:42, 5 June 2024 (UTC)
 * I may have figured this out. Please see the text at the top of the page draft.  Memphremagog (talk) 22:41, 5 June 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Group14 Technologies (June 14)
 Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were:

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Safari Scribe Edits! Talk! 05:39, 14 June 2024 (UTC)