User talk:Mentally illiterate

Religious fraud
Hi. I have reverted what you added to this article for a number of reasons.

Firstly, if it belongs anywhere, I would expect it to be on the the Baptist Foundation of Arizona article, but there appears to be no mention there of it, or the principal actor in the case. Why is that?

Secondly, it is very important that any Wikipedia article that alleges criminal activity, and may be libellous, has excellent reliable sources. But the two you provide merely lead to a login page for a research resource. How is anyone to verify that what is said is accurate and true?

Thirdly, while this case may be a good example of Religious fraud, it provides too much detail and dominates the article. Again, it would be better to add the content (with sources) to the main Baptist Foundation of Arizona article, and summarise it on Religious fraud as an example.

Lastly, you left editor notes visible on the page.

Thanks. Escape Orbit (Talk) 10:29, 3 November 2022 (UTC)


 * My English teacher for this assignments set so many parameters that it made it impossible to add anything of value to any incomplete stub. For example, I was only allowed to use sources from the school's library databases, which for the most part has a very limited supply of outdated sources.
 * Also, thank you for the feedback. Mentally illiterate (talk) 13:50, 3 November 2022 (UTC)