User talk:Mentor321/sandbox

Topic for Art Since 1945 article
Ken Schles Photographer
 * I moved this from your sandbox to your Talk page. That way, it will stay put as we move forward with editing. Aolivex (talk) 19:15, 9 February 2015 (UTC)

Peer review of the Ken Schles article
After reading your article on Ken Schles, I found that there was a great and extensive bit of the information, considering that there is not much information available on the topic. I would encourage you to explore on the photographer's early life and to expand on the titles and topics mentioned. I happily look forward to the final article, which I am sure will be a valuable addition to Wikipedia. PITTWWI (talk) 01:16, 22 March 2015 (UTC)

Review
Very good start. I think that emphasis on his awards and accomplishments are a good way to show the "notability" of the topic. I believe that was the problem you encountered when first putting the page. Good organization (with the section headings) Looking forward to the sections to come. Lcr27 (talk) 16:48, 24 March 2015 (UTC)