User talk:Mercyxiong/sandbox

Peer review- Adrienne

Hi Mercy!

Your article is looking good so far! Are you planning to put this on the K-pop wiki under "criticisms and controversies"? I think it would fit very well there! A one thing that you can think about while working on your article is adding more citations. I noticed in the first line, there are some phrases in quotations but no citation, who said these phrases? Another place that could use a citation is when you describe South Korea as a patriarchal society-- though I believe this myself, it feels a little bit like an opinion without a citation I think! Good luck with the rest of your writing!