User talk:Merfarfel

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Hello, Merfarfel, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review---John, Edward, Matt

Link Pennsylvania Link illegitimate child change in second line to - " but was shortly after sent to live with a friend of the mother" Link vaginitis Link umbilical hernia The sentence structure is very short and repetitive, I know its a encyclopedia, but try to make it a little more varied — Preceding unsigned comment added by Basementcrew (talk • contribs) 20:06, 21 November 2017 (UTC)